Camping Pinedo coll vertI spent about 1 hour 10 mins on this essay, i know i have some mistakes on it. I am not an English speaker, it’s hard for me to find all the mistakes on the essay. Please correct this essay if there are any mistakes or any recommendations. Everyone’s opinion will be considered. Thanks!
The Causes of Wildfires
As we all know, wildfires happen everywhere all over the world. It is an unfortunate thing in our nations. A wildfire also known as a wildland fire, forest fire, vegetation fire, grass fire, or hill fire is an uncontrolled fire often occurring in the wildland areas, which can spread quickly throughout the areas or towns. Some people may wonder, what causes a wildfire? There are many reasons that cause the wildfire, but according to many research, the main reason that causes the wildfire is humans. Three common causes are human carelessness, dryness, and slash-and-burn farming.
Most investigators believe that humans play a big role in the causes of wildfires. Some people go hunting, and camping in the woods all the time. They’re likely to make fire because it’s cold in the woods at night. In addition, they are also likely to smoke cigarettes, cooking in the forest. Those human behaviors can cause wildfire to occur if they’re not careful of what they’re doing. Because of their behaviors, wildfires occur quickly and unnoticed. As a result of human behaviors, wildfires happen so often in the wildlands.
Another possible cause for the wildfires is the dryness. In southern California, the weather is too dry making wildfires even easier to occur. Due to the human carelessness, the dryness, arson, slash-and-burn farming, wildfires happen so often in the southern of California. When the weather is dry, the woods, the logs, or the trees won’t have much water around them. It doesn’t rain much. So, when someone makes a mistake, the fire will spread quickly and might be too late to extinguish. Because of the dryness, wildfires are fast and hard to manage.
A third cause for the wildfires is slash-and-burn farming. According to the Encyclopedia of Earth “Slash and burn consists of cutting and burning of forests or woodlands to create fields for agriculture or pasture for livestock, or for a variety of other purposes. It is sometimes part of shifting cultivation agriculture, and of transhumance livestock herding.” People may not know what might happen due to the slash-and-burn farming if they don’t take precautions. Farmers do slash-and-burn the forest to get lands for planting, raising cattle, or build houses. Consequently, this practice is one of the major causes for the wildfires. As a result of this practice, wildfires happen regularly in the around the farming areas.
It seems that no matter how devastating the wildfires can cause the lives of human and animal, the rate of having wildfires doesn’t seem to drop at all. Wildfire is one of the life-threatening events in the world, yet there aren’t any exactly solutions to this problem.
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I think A wildfire also known as a wildland fire, should have a comma after wild fire and wildland should be changed to be like this: A wildfire, also known as a wild land fire,
I think you should not write according to many research but just according to research or according to some research.
Because of their behaviours should be because of their behaviour. wildfires occur quickly and unnoticed should be wildfires occur quickly and are unnoticed or maybe you should just take the unnoticed out because it doesn't make any sense in the sentence.
Again, As a result of human behaviours should be As a result of human behavior
Due to the human carelessness should be Due to human carelessness
In southern California, the weather is too dry making wildfires even easier to occur should have a comma changing it to: In southern California, the weather is too dry, making wildfires even easier to occur
In my opinion, It doesn’t rain much should be taken out because there is no real need of it.
the fire will spread quickly and might be too late to extinguish should be changed to the fire will spread quickly and if not treated fast enough might be too late to extinguish
or build houses should be or building houses.
in the around should be in and around
human and animal should be humans and animals
Wildfire is one of the life-threatening should be Wildfire is one of the most life-threatening
yet there aren't any exactly solutions to this problem should be yet there aren't any solutions to this problem yet but I recommend taking it out because it is part of the conclusion and you shouldn't add any new ideas to conclusions.
DONE!!!!!!
Also is this a formal essay? If it is then you should not abbreviate anything. I mean don't make do not don't or should not shouldn't.
I know this a lot of writing but hey, so is your essay and I went through that.
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PS: This is an excellent effort for a non English speaker in my opinion!
